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Princess Luna

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By the way, best princess. :v
 
Princess Luna's model for Ask #5 is done, but the artpiece is still on hold for now.
Every inch of detail was poured into this, and it was exhausting. But it was all worthwhile to make it presentably outstanding to my eyes.
It's to be used for 5k Special - Ask #5, but for now, I think it's a good idea to post this by itself.
 
Critiques, huh? Might as well test this out too.
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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

Let me start off by saying that you did a great job at creating a vector of Princess Luna from scratch. It almost feels like this was taken from a still of the actual show. Every single one of her features is almost identical to the character design, including the crown, the cutie mark, and the necklace (that’s what I’m calling it for now). I should also point out that you wisely kept the sparkles in her mane and tail small and spread out. You didn’t go too crazy with them. However, there are some criticisms I would like to give. Firstly, I would make her a bit taller. If the idea is to create a younger Luna, that’s fine, but if not, then her legs should be longer. Second, I would have her horn extended and at a more acute angle. Lastly, the eye appears to be a little too big. Shrinking it would do the piece some benefit. But other than that, I don’t think this piece is too bad. Your goal was to create a vector of Luna, and that’s exactly what you did. Overall, it’s pretty good. Keep up the great work, Sny-por!